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   The final count down, soon it'll be my time,

   My only thoughts are of you, my rose...

   Oh promises, promises that were left behind.

   Thoughts of a life, a love, a tragic time.

   

   Instead of the sun, I was granted the night

   I moved with the moon,

   denied by the light.

   

   Oh promises, promise of a forgotten song,

   You once sang to me,

   In a time I once was in love.

   

   The rose it beats red

   Like your heart I knew,

   In a time, a tragic time, I loved you.

   

   I took a chance, your warmth I felt,

   The beating heart in your chest,

   The graceful pace of your breath,

   The very spark of your soul,

   Illuminating my world, granting me light, my very own to hold.

   

   Your eyes how they told, every story of my soul,

   I couldn't forget them if I could.

   “Steady” you said, the rose so red “For I have wept many times by hansom men”

   I would mend her heart, be true in the end.

   

   Little did I know, it was your blood that would stain my hands,

   Now I weep, within this dungeon cell,

   The cold floor beneath me,

   My own personal hell.

   

   Oh promises, promises of song long forgotten,

   Of the life, the love, the tragic time,

   When I found you, my love, my wife.

   

   The count down begins, the moment of the end.

   A paradise lost, the end of a dream.

   Here I'll die by filthy hands,

   My only salvation is hope,

   Hope I will find you, again.
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I'm not much of a writer, but I do like to write poetry from time to time as another form of expression. I hope everyone enjoys this little poetic story : )
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Yay you posted this here =p This seems like a very fitting poem to go into your story as well. Kind of reminds me of Dante and Celine I think it was except with some minor differences Dante didn't kill her but in a way doomed her to lose her abilities. While Celine was ultimately the doom of Dante his death on her hands and by her living she is doomed to live with the memories of that day... something like that =] You do have a knack for poetry and story telling.
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*AutumsMoon Feb 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I had fun writing this. It was different to write from a males point of view. Most of
It was inspired by zak because of how he feels. Then theres a little of my story : )
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:iconformymuse:
Not bad at all!
You definitely have a knack for writing!
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*AutumsMoon Feb 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! : D
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